Target for this lesson...

My target for this lesson is to receive feedback on my website and billboard and edit those to make them better and stand out more. If there is time, I will continue on with my double page spread.

Update on Front Cover

 

This is an update on my front cover. I have also been given feedback for my front cover and I have acted on it by completely changing the dominant image because the other didn't work that well and it wasn't getting across to the reader what the magazine was about. I have also changed the colours of the sell lines because they were getting lost in the image and you couldn't see them clearly. I have also changed the tag line because it said "That festival feeling" and I changed it because my masthead already says the word festival so I changed it to music so the reader would then know more about what is within the magazine. I have also changed the banner positioning because it was originally at the top of my magazine but I have now moved it to the bottom because it then frees up some space at the top so I can move my masthead up. 

Update on Contents Page

 

This is an update on my contents page. I have been given feedback from my lecturer and I have acted on it by adding an extra image to make it look professional and I have also added text underneath the subheadings to add more information about the subjects that I have raised. I have also moved the website to the bottom of the page because it didn't fit with the masthead at the top. I have also moved the masthead so that the "contents" is underneath the actual name of the magazine. I have done this because it then frees up some space for me to add in social media links and other important information about the magazine. 

Target for this lesson...

My target for this lesson is to continue on with my double page spread and edit the parts that I have done after the feedback that I was given last lesson.

Update on Front Cover

I have changed the image on my front cover because the previous one didn't fit well with my magazine genre. I have moved some of the text around so it fits on the page and so it is clearly visible to the audience/reader.

March Time Management